Blog Title: Dragon Writing using Emotive Language

1. Write at least a paragraph of your ‘dragon story’. This paragraph MUST contain emotive language.

2. Publish the blog post.

3. Add images that relate to your story.

The dragon launched his hot fiery,smelly breath to eat those kids. Antonio was hungry because he flew so long and he wanted to get a snake.He also went to jet some water to drink. When he want there he meet this an other dragon that was nice and he was with that dragon for a long time. He marred him and had multiple of dragon babes. Then he was fling and feel because he was sick and he missed his family.

Dragon writing using emotive language

Blog Title: Dragon Writing using Emotive Language

1. Write at least a paragraph of your ‘dragon story’. This paragraph MUST contain emotive language.

2. Publish the blog post.

3. Add images that relate to your story.

The dragon launched his hot fiery,smelly breath to eat those kids. Antonio was hungry because he flew so long snd he wanted to get a snake.

what is a plot line?

Plot Parts

• Exposition–intorduced to characters, location and setting
• Rising Action–tension comes
• Climax–main tension
• Falling Action–tension ends
• Resolution–there is calmness

 

Exposition: It would be the dragon. It is close to the mountain. The setting is on ruff land.

Rising Action: The tension comes when people trying to kill the best.

Climax: The main tension would be people killing to end the dragon.

Falling Action:When the tension ends when dragon or the people die.

Resolution:The calmness is when the dragons are goon or the humans die.

What are your ideas for the ‘Dragon’ Plot Line? Write examples of what would go into the five parts of your plot line.

Oliver Twist Unit Reflection

1. I liked watching the movie.  I liked this because I liked laying down and that it is fun watch the movie.
2. The things that I like is watching the movie and doing other stuff. The stuff that I hated was reading the book and using this blog all the time.
3. I would rate this unit a 6 because I know some of the stuff  that we learned.I like doing the project but I didn’t like doing the presentation.
4. I was engaged in parents weekend because I answered all the questions that my teacher asked us. I am not that engaged when we read the book and sometimes when we do other  things in class.

Homework #6

1.    I am going to rate Oliver Twist the book 3/10 and I rate the move 10/10. I rate the book because it was too long. I rate the movie because I like to watch moves. The text I like is when Oliver asked for more food. I would tell people why they should watch Oliver Twist because it is cool and it had some fighting.

2.I feel kinda bad about Fagin because he gave Oliver food,a bed, a roof over his head and he didn’t want to kill Oliver. The bad thing is that he drugged Oliver  and didn’t protect him from Bill.

How does Dickens’ language reveal that Oliver is scared in the burglary scene.

During the burglary scene Dickens’ language reveals that Oliver is scared because he realized that they were going to breaks into Mr. Brownlow house. Dickens says that distance, and a cold deadly feeling crept over the boy’s heart,and he saw or heard no more he says that because that is what Oliver feels. This description reveals that Oliver can not feel is heart no more. Dickens uses the word horror to describe Oliver’s fear because it is not right for Oliver to go through this.  This word deadly feeling is significant because it goes with an image of death.

Homework #4

1. Dickerson views Victorian society as very black and white because the poor were bad and the rich were nice. An the environment where people fell into stereo types.

2. I think about these characters that some are very nice but some are very mean and others are in the middle. They treat Oliver nice, mean, and in the middle. Mr. Brownlow is very nice because he brought a stray boy into his house and gave him food,water, better close, made him feel better and trusted him. Nancy is nice to Oliver because she didn’t think that the dog had to hurt or kill Oliver. Another is that he said to Oliver befor they went to see bill.  Bill Sykes is very mean to Oliver because he wanted the dog to go and attack Oliver. Another thing is that he was thretened him with a gun to his face, and made him stell some things from mr.Brownlow’s house. Mr.Sykis shot at Oliver and tryed to through him into the water and leave him to die what a bad person.The last person that I am taking about is Todd Cracket he is mean and kinda nice. The thing that makes him nice is that he didn’t drop Oliver on the mudy streat and let him die. The mean thing is that he made I think oliver tyr to robb that house or that was Sykis.

3. Mr.Brownlow is a charecter in Oliver Twist that his is a very nice person. He trustes Oliver with respect and trustes him. I know this because he trusted him with the books and the money to give the book person the books back and the money.

 

What makes someone a criminal?

I believe that a criminal can be defined as a bad person. This is different than a person that isn’t a criminal. A person that isn’t a criminal is a person that kills someone. In the book Oliver twist, it could be argued that Fagin is and isn’t a criminal. On one hand, Fagin is a criminal because he abuses and uses them. These are criminal activities because it is not nice to the kids. Although he does these things, some might consider him not a criminal because they get food,water,and a place over there head. These types of activities could be viewed as nice because they still get or stay alive. Overall,my opinion of Fagin is that he that he a rely  bad person but sometimes he is nice.

What we did in class

The thing with Oliver is that he was a place and this person ciked the dor and hi woke up and went to eat and there was food for him. Oliver went to this place were there was a died person and he didn’t like it.

blog entry

Oliver was so hungry that he went up and ask for more. For example “he rose from the table” shows that he rose up fast. This kid tooled Oliver to go up and ask for more. They were very hungry that they were like wolves with new meat. He got in trouble for asking for more food.